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August 6th, 2009, 9:32 pm

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Reply annhell, August 6th, 2009, 9:39 pm

New page! The style's changed a little too >_> More focus on linework, less tones...I hope I haven't overdone the cuteness though! *worries* Admittedly, I find Maina cute myself (which I normally don't, for my own characters. I'm not into 'cute' >_<) but I'm worried that she's becoming annoying?? Please tell me, someone *A*

Work isn't as bad as before, thanks for all the concern! Well I'm entering a local comics competition, so wish me luck folks! I could do with a little spare ka-ching! Anyways, I've been wondering if the webpage is too 'yellow'. Or bright?

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Reply xxsillybonesxx, August 6th, 2009, 9:47 pm

Great page!
Hahaha, she won't take those chimp comments lying down! D<
And she isn't annoying, in fact, I find that she has some pretty awesome qualities.

Good luck in the competionnnn!

Reply 3o-s-knight, August 6th, 2009, 9:49 pm

yay, it's really nice when authors ask for feedback =D

1. it's fantastic you are enterign a local comic competition!! =DD that's fantastic and i'm so exited!! please let us know what happens!! =]

2. theyellow is a really ncie shade acutally and i quite like the layout compared to the old one it had =0 it's more like a mellow yellow than bright yellow =]

3. the new style is quite a nice change and soemtihng a little different, i peirsnally prefer less tone sin comics in general so i guess it works for me! the expressipons as always are fabulous, i LOVE the last panel which is hillariously detailed xDDD!!!

also, i don't find mana too annoying?? i wouldn't say she's over-cutesey either, more like cute in the odd way XD which is why i guess she isn't too annoying (I see what you mean about cute being over-bearing -_- ) she's rather charming/infectious really =]

i love the older brother's lack of concern haha xD

Reply 3o-s-knight, August 6th, 2009, 9:52 pm

WOAH I just read you are an animator!! =0

that's fantastic! must be stressful at times but still fantastic!! and it explains why ypou are amazing at drawing!! (sorry! i just have a lot of respect for people who animate! ) I've not the patence xD;

may i be nosey, what have you animated? =0 sorry for being nosey!

Reply Catiris, August 6th, 2009, 11:12 pm

I like the site, it's nice and happy colored x)

last panel is scaring me, thoughhhh
is it symbolic or really happening??
because that would be so disturbing irl :C

Reply annhell, August 7th, 2009, 2:04 am

Replies [[catiris]] I'm sorry *A* I should have given a warning. Last panel is in fact, a transition to a new scene, with the same action being played out! A sort of transitioning juxtapose maybe. So it is in fact, blood and gore! Someone else's, of course =3

[[knight]] Hahah, yea, I'm under an awful lot of stress most of the time. Though it's the funnest job I could find XD! As for what I've animated...hm it's mostly flash cartoons for kids, being aired at some places =3 Boring stuff really, but it brings in some income, so XDD maybe I'll post some clips when I have the time! For your viewing (un)pleasure XD!

And thanks for the feedback =DDD Always fun to be interacting with you *O* The last panel is actually a gory shot (sorry I didn't post a warning!) but haha! I think its quite funny that you find it hilarious XDD!! Thanks for the comment about Maina too! I'm always cautious about the mary-sue syndrome so I need constant feedback from the readers. I'm relieved to hear that you're ok with the direction so far :D

And older brother is so nonchalent haha! I did enjoy writing him too =3

[[xxsillybonesxx]] YAY I'm glad you think so <333 You're awesome too for saying that =DDD Thanks for your good luck wish XD!!

Reply Paliana, August 7th, 2009, 7:50 am

Omg!! XD I was not expecting that in the last panel ... but humorous nontheless! I love your linework, it's very smooth and I like the variations. Keep up the awesome work!

Reply ayumei, August 7th, 2009, 10:16 am

Aa~ horror. Unexpected really! Isn't it just her imagination!? Wanna know~... (I like the 1st panel with the brother on the back)

The yellow is refreshing for a layout. Very sweet and light feel to it. But it hurts your eyes when reading the comments. But I guess you don't have problems with it, so it's alright. (can always highlight the text...they turn blue and it's easier reading :-)

Reply eternalbeliever12, August 12th, 2009, 6:28 pm

wow this comic is awesome
Best lineart ive ever seen!
what do you use?? :p

Reply korrected, August 13th, 2009, 5:07 pm

Holy crap that's pretty vicious lol

Reply xxsatomii, September 12th, 2009, 5:31 am

I also like this comic! Maina seems like a really funny and also naive girl, not really annoying ^_~; I also respect that your an animator, I almost decided to study animation.. but neh.. looking forward for more!! ^^

Reply annhell, September 13th, 2009, 10:06 pm

Replies Paliana: Thank you haha! I think I might have overdone it a bit with the last panel ^^; But I'm glad you like the linework. Thank you so much =DD

ayumei: Yeea it's horror xD I thought it was time to make introductions to the other part of the story, which is the demon world. Ahh yea I think I'll have to do something about the font colour...it's hard on my eyes as well >_< Thanks for the feedback!

eternalbeliever12: thank you! I don't think it's the best, though I work my ass off for the lines >_< And I use mangastudio! It really rocks so hard. Highly recommended =DD

xxsatomii: Thanks! You're such a sweetheart xD It's great to hear what people think about the characters =DDD Emm well animation is fun and all...but its pretty damn tiring <_< Btw, my name is Joyce too (I'm assuming that it's yours xD)Hahaha. Just curious, what did you study, if not animation, in the end?

Reply Chirurotsu, October 22nd, 2009, 7:24 am

geese this comic is making me laugh so much, i love ur sense of humor, and the art is great, all their facial expressions and the humorish ones are great, overall i love ur main character its something new and its enjoyable, she's so funny the way she'll stand up for herself, and not care a shit tht hse plays with dolls in the middle of the class, by the way u made a really good start to the story, i was already captured by it, from just reading 2 pages :D
also this page is class did so not see the last panel come, VIOLENT STUFF lol, but it works really well

Reply sweets8, February 1st, 2011, 10:14 pm

holy crap! she just bloodied his eyeballs XP

Reply Moblin, May 28th, 2011, 3:17 pm

Ouch! that looks painful D:

Reply kumikoangeloflight, December 19th, 2011, 11:26 pm

That's it???!! D: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! T_T

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